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LogDog75

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5. I read the thesis of one of my troops going for his masters degree
Tue Dec 2, 2025, 01:39 PM
16 hrs ago

He told me he needed an idea for his master's degree so I gave him one I had been thinking of that would improve our service to the base. I discussed with him how I envisioned us implementing this and asked him if he could improve it. He said he needed someone to oversee his project and would I do it which I said yes. After he completed his thesis, he asked me to read it and give him constructive criticism. Overall, he did a good job explaining the problem, gathering the facts, proposing solutions, choose his solution and how it would be implemented as well as the coordination on vertical and horizontal levels of management. The only thing I had problems with was the entire thesis was written in a passive voice as opposed to an active voice. He said the school preferred a passive voice for thesis papers. He submitted it and received his master's degree.

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