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Fiendish Thingy

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4. Good points, however you might want to edit for clarity
Mon Dec 1, 2025, 09:40 AM
Monday

You make this statement:

This is the narrative that Putin is pushing for several reasons


And then follow it with a list of true statements that are NOT Russian propaganda.

To make clear that “this” refers to the prior statement about propaganda, and not the list of truths that follows, might I suggest you change “this” to “that”.

(Sorry to nitpick your syntax, but clarity of communication is crucial these days)

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