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Writing

yellerpup

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2. I'm not good at parsing this type of writing.

Reply to ddickey (Original post)

Fri Mar 9, 2012, 04:22 PM

Mar 2012

I'm a playwright and novelist, but I will mention that Thos. Jefferson cribbed heavily from the Iroquois Constitution. What he left out was the 'grandmothers'. All men and women are created equal. This information is for your future writing, should you choose to pursue it. I like your writing. Good essay.

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Can I get some feedback on an article? [View all] ddickey Mar 2012 OP

The article is good, but I do have some comments. HopeHoops Mar 2012 #1

Sorry ddickey Mar 2012 #4

I finished the German text and am back on the book. I've broken it down into a few basic comments. HopeHoops Mar 2012 #5

I'm not good at parsing this type of writing. yellerpup Mar 2012 #2

Along the same lines as HopeHoops... Fearless Mar 2012 #3