General Discussion

Supposed to be Letitia, not Leticia.

He’s trying to say “lawyers” but he says “ layers.” Stephen Miller, a lawyer, would not make that mistake.

Blue highlighted area: too many commas in first sentence.
Second sentence: comma splice.

Note the childish appeal to Bondi: she likes you a lot. She is a good lawyer and she likes you.

I do agree it is better than most of his writing, however.