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Godot51

(602 posts)
Thu Aug 21, 2025, 07:10 PM Thursday

lost in the moment of sin

lost in the moment of sin

lost in the moment of of sin wondering what is next
befuddled mindless blank adrift in a sea of pleasure
how did the madness begin mumbling and perplexed
glimpsing a soul that sank on a first wave of measure
lost in the moment of sin buried deep with no escape
unwilling to release a grip unable to find the way out
after the last fall has been judged every mouth agape
to descend and ever slip to show no remorse or doubt
lost in the moment of sin as lips meet unmatched lips
the limbs tangle limbs stiffen seeking the final release
one last spasm and then a loosening of the tight hips
breath held the breath quickens as all thoughts cease
lost in the moment of sin yet ready to repeat all again
lost in the moment of sin unsteady incomplete within

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lost in the moment of sin (Original Post) Godot51 Thursday OP
Wow Dear_Prudence Thursday #1

Dear_Prudence

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1. Wow
Thu Aug 21, 2025, 07:26 PM
Thursday

Powerful. Evocative. Sadly, Godot51, for me at this age, 'the moment of sin' is that first lick of an ice cream cone on a hot summer day.

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