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Related: About this forumDU fiction writers/readers: Explain when best to introduce a McGuffin v a Deus ex machina.
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DU fiction writers/readers: Explain when best to introduce a McGuffin v a Deus ex machina. (Original Post)
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Irish_Dem
(74,402 posts)1. Wouldn't McG have to come early in the plot?
It serves no other purpose but gives meaning and direction to the plot.
And the DEM comes later to add interest and a twist.
brush
(61,033 posts)2. Ok, so the McG has to come first, no DEM early?
Irish_Dem
(74,402 posts)3. DEM is the resolution of the plot conflict?
So it would come later.
Be careful with it.
Some say it is lazy writing.
brush
(61,033 posts)4. Yes, DEM seems to suggest writer's inability to resolve the ending.
Irish_Dem
(74,402 posts)5. So uses a gimmick.
Orrex
(65,995 posts)6. She pointed at the McGuffin and said "Look, there's a McGuffin."
"Biggest McGuffin I ever saw," he agreed.
Then they fired up their Deus ex Machina and resolved the entire plot.
brush
(61,033 posts)9. In other words, ditch the obvious gimmicks.
Orrex
(65,995 posts)10. Well, I was mostly making fun of my own writing
Even an obvious gimmick used well is a worthy plot device, so dont give my admonition more weight than it merits.
Irish_Dem
(74,402 posts)7. I think you should write the story you want to write.
If you are creative, and a good writer, write the story in your head, the way you want to write it.
Don't get bogged down in technique or what other people think you should do.
You are the artist, create your story.
brush
(61,033 posts)8. Good advice. Thank you.